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Michèle Breton's avatar

What a powerful yet beautiful poem! It reads so smoothly, with every rhyme flowing like the sea! I loved it and will restack it too! ✨

Laura B's avatar

Thank you so much, Michèle 🫶🏽🖤✨

Hina Gondal's avatar

Love this

Laura B's avatar

Thank you, Hina 🖤🧜🏽‍♀️

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Incredibly well done, Laura. Fantastic writing.

Laura B's avatar

Thank you, Gary! 🫶🏽🖤🧜🏽‍♀️

Alicia's avatar

Sublime. Reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe.

Laura B's avatar

Thank you so much, Alicia... what a heart melting compliment 🫠

Roger Browne's avatar

sirens call, wonderful story

Laura B's avatar

Thank you, Roger 🖤🧜🏽‍♀️

Emmett Tatter's avatar

Fabulous ✨✨✨

Laura B's avatar

Thank you, Emmett! 🖤✨🧜🏽‍♀️

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

You’re such a beautiful storyteller! Beautiful. 😍

Laura B's avatar

Thank you so much, sis 🥹🖤✨

Aaliya's avatar

Just beautiful

Laura B's avatar

Thank you, sis 🫶🏽🖤✨

Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

An interesting way to tell a story - between myth and poem, between the real and the underworld.

Laura B's avatar

I'm glad you enjoyed it 🙏🏽🖤

James (HVR)'s avatar

Phew. Something tells me Odysseus wouldn't have made it through this obstacle.

Laura B's avatar

Definitely not 🤭🧜🏽‍♀️

Olly von's avatar

Love this such a satisfying flow you had throughout this and the story of the sirens yes couldn’t love it more

Laura B's avatar

Thank you so much, Olly! I'm so glad you enjoyed it 🫶🏽🖤🧜🏽‍♀️

Lynn J. Broderick's avatar

Stunning. You're such a talented writer.

Laura B's avatar

Thank you, Lynn... that truly means so much to me 🥹🫶🏽🖤

Sacred AF - Ami ❤️‍🔥's avatar

Gorgeous Laura. I love this.❤️‍🔥

Laura B's avatar

Thank you so much, sis! 🖤✨🧜🏽‍♀️

Jim Allen's avatar

For now I’m a free sub and I made a $10 BMAC. Let’s see how this plays out.

Laura B's avatar

That means so much to me... truly 🫶🏽 thank you, Jim 🖤🫂

Nick J Berg's avatar

The Siren's Call! I love it!

Laura B's avatar

Thank you, Nick! 🖤🧜🏽‍♀️